Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 5 December 2018
Mairehau's Merrylicious Market
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post


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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Zoe! It's Ruby from Marshland School!
ReplyDeletePositive: I liked the way you added pictures into your blog post. They look good!
Thoughtful: Did you think about describing the smells and what type there are?
Helpful: Next time you could add more description.
Could you blog the recipe you used next time?
Overall: Great!